Sketchbook (songs by me :D)

[Astrid Rotweil]

So I'm bored. I decided that, since I write lyrics all the time, I'd share some of my songs with you guys. Might as well, they'll never be heard anywhere else anyway. :P

Starting with my latest one. This one is a rap (shut up, I rap, get over it) about the shit people talk about me for dating a guy I met online... then saying yes when he asked me to marry him.

Not sure what I'm calling it. Maybe "Too teen" or something.

Here it is;

[talking]
"You're to young to be in love."
"He's too far to be true."
"Too short lived for marriage."
Well I've had too much of you.

[rapping]
So what if we met online,
some sleazy site with pick up lines?
Guess what, it's all the same old game to me,
Dating, fighting, growing teens

Guess what, in real life it seems
we're all too stuck on cliches and scenes
to bother considering true love anyway

I ain't gonna stop today

Because you say
It's not okay
Then turn around and
frown on gays
and kids with too long hair
or getting laid b'fore your wedding day

Well guess what, that's life today
it's our time now,
so stay away
from our business, bitch

it's not okay
for you to say we're all too ---[bleep]---

[chorus]
Yeah, so what?
I'm eighteen
Still a kid?
Fuck that scene.
I love him,
he loves me.
If it don't work out,
ain't your place,
so don't you say,
"told you so".
I'll dig your grave.
Say goodbye,
'cause he's my guy.
I'm in love and
it ain't no lie.

It's not done but I'm happy with what I have so far. :3 What do you guys think?

[Avery Newfeld]

Though I don't personally like rap, I like the song, or the lyrics at least since I haven't technically /heard/ it as a song.

I feel the same wayy honestly, since me and Skylar are in an online relationship, only when asked, I say it's a long-distance relationship. Less questions and strange stares and "it's not gonna work out"s.